What about the things that you left at my place?
What I left at yours?
What we left in our space
After every time we walked through the doors?

If we feel no regret, then let it all fade
If no longing remains
If no heartache or chains
If it feels too strange, then walk away.

But come on over if you wanna come over
If you wanna drop by, just do
I’m still right here, nothing’s different with you.

And I’ll drop by if you want me to drop by
I guess that I will, but hey—
Please tell me out loud if I overstay.

Did we really leave nothing behind anymore?
Is this really the end? Better check around once more
Take a look before you walk out the door
- Take a look around before saying goodbye

If there's nothing we forgot, then let it just be
- You won't come
No need to drop by to see
No regrets left to trace
Treat it like the very last time.

But come on over if you want to.
If you wanna drop by, just do.
I’m still right here, nothing’s changed on my end.

And I’ll drop by if you ask me to,
I probably will, but hey—
Tell me straight up if I overstay.
- Tell me to go if I stay too long
Tell me to leave if I overstay...

Listen:
Please kick me out.
Please send me home.

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If my father were to die today 

let him rest between the silence after fight

let him be still and listen 

what happens to a family

when violence becomes an answer

let his breath cease like our voice

that hides away in shame 

--

If my father were to die today 

let him die 

let him know how it feels

to kill the innocence of a woman 

make a son look after his mother 

let him understand how a mind rots 

when a mother is forced to cut all her ties

with family, with friends 

with her soul and strength

--

If my father were to die today 

let him not 

let him feel the love of the family that he damaged 

let him feel the warmth of woman 

treated so cold 

let him depend on his son

who had none 

but his mother to depend on

let peace penetrate his leathery heart

and our wounds soothe his rage

--

If my father were to die today 

let him see 

the pain he passed on to us

handed down to him

by his father 

upbringing that messed him up

the same cycle that he repeats 

will be the death of the cycle itself 

let him regret the things he did 

and things he put us through

and learn

that a broken child seldom grows up

to build a new one 

--

If my father were to die today

let him say

he was sorry and strives to change 

and we in return would say 

it is hard to forgive but we will do

and let him share our family too

--

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Therapy is once a month
And you’re alone for 28 days while parents
Galavant to Asia
Business and Buddha
The usual 

The loneliness creeps in at 1AM
The parents’ bedroom too big
For markers and books and plushies
Yet so small for a girl, age 34
Still wondering what lies in her future

Between pharmacy licenses and tutoring
Seasonal job hunts and mopping
(which you’ll get to tomorrow, no big deal)
Piano and tutoring
She wonders if it’s okay…

To just…not be okay.

But there are four bedrooms to scream in
Three days of karate per week
Two coloring books to complete
(2 48-packs of Ohuhus to aid you, plus 10 dozen more for fun)

Church has people listening to your concerns
And a God who takes your sufferings
So that some other person in Africa can convert it to good
Make a better place than a bad place.

You have friends and family to connect with
Discord and Viber at your fingertips
A car for one-hour drives
Dumplings in the freezer

Journals for self-care and solo RPGs
Multiple pens with glitter and scents
Endless adventures based on the draw of a card
Up to 6 at a time

There is love, there is a future
There are connections and noodles
There are plants (gotta keep basil from bolting)
And dishes (wash the backs as well)

There are movies to watch
There’s matcha and pumpkin for coffee days
And hot water to cleanse your Rubber Soul

There is you, and you’re gonna be okay

(And there’s red velvet cake in the fridge. Don’t forget the cake)

Note: Title spacing is based on the editing on tvtropes. This trope is a pet peeve of mine which discusses how people in fiction never seem to get therapy for their problems. Heavily inspired by the loneliness I'm feeling as my parents are off for a month-long business trip in Myanmar and Thailand.

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I made a choice to enrich my mind
My mind , the song , the poem , the art
My mind, the science, the math , the logic
All in one but all is lost
Fireworks up down left right
Dazzling pieces lost to space
But at least we’re entertained

I made a choice to enrich my mind
My Choice, the downloads and uploads
My choice, the daily routine of chastisement and lawlessness
The dissolving body of choice
One path lost, second, third
All the propaganda smoke screen giving leave
The touch controlled choice

I made a choice to enrich my mind
Enrich my heart my mind my eyes
Enrich my hunger for knowledge and aggression
Satisfaction without location of origin
Fingers curl and stretch in hunger for satisfaction
Satisfaction by the envoy of the rich

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Every time these cold waves rise—
crashing down in their gentle rhythm—
they bring back memories of you.

As far as my eyes can wander,
no path reveals itself to me,
only vast waters stretching everywhere.

Surrounded by towering mountains,
I sit upon a bench, alone, and wait,
leaving the space beside me empty...

hoping the voice of these surging waves
somehow reaches you.

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It’ll be a doozy, I’ll tell you that much
But it starts with the second line of a poem
I wrote three years ago about persimmons
Charred, split, pale bodies on cinnamon
(I kept it alone and deleted the rest).

Then goes a conversation overheard at a
Shell station, unmoored by a rigidity
Bulging from the Civic at Station Three,
Where she asked him why motherhood is
Being, and why fatherhood is becoming.
Half-gone now, on a curry stained napkin.

I’ll slide in a line or two about fourteen,
And the thoughts I had about Miss Abel.
The skirts, the almond-slivers of ankle
That I forgot when the water shut off but
Which floated back like unfinished love,
Tentative and kindly.

The next stanza might start in Chinese
How the word for “famous” translates to
“Have-name,” and I’ll finish it with a
Rant on Facebook of a furious mother
Who is plying a chasm, a language loss,
With overripe fruits and pleading silence.

The poem has the clouds, of course,
My jarred plums and softened basil,
And my weeping to “Wild Geese”.
Then somewhere along stanza three –
I’ll stuff in, swollen, poems that failed
Oh, the Poem and the competition
Envelope between pairs of socks.

Here you have it. Best listened to,
Or read aloud in the dark, or spit
Onto a bathroom mirror, or left
Outside cold, with the prosciutto
Plates and warm lemonade.

-

1 2

Sitting in the dark,

Yet the light was on.

Nothing to see,

But pictures of dawn—

A dawn I never saw,

Only dreamt to see.

Not because the sun never came,

But because I never believed.

I said it was lies—

Lies that I wanted to be true.

But nothing blinds one’s eyes

More than the hatred within his heart.

Not just any hatred,

But a hatred so pure:

A self-sabotage.

You don’t grow with it,

But you learn to live with it.

To let it consume you,

To feed and feast—

You become a lamb

For your own devils to eat.

You say you’re not afraid of death,

You say you’ll never die.

But every time you get close to it,

You start praying to God.

Yet you can't lie—

Only in death do you feel alive.

You wish for agony,

But never for demise.

You wish to burn

Until you can't no more.

You say it's for others,

But it's just another selfish act of yours.

A liar,

A thief,

A madman,

A kid,

A sinner,

A priest,

A sheep,

And a wolf—

You never were you,

Just a reflection of your own disbeliefs.

Never the truth.

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As I tread the trail on a warm spring night
And the sagging trees obscure my sight
I peer ahead and see a bird ahead
A crane? No, “A vulture!” I said.

Below its feet, a carcass has settled
From the vultures picking, its canvas speckled
I approach this bird, my rhythm has slowed
And the stench of the carcass, floods my nose

The closer I get, the more I can see
So I stop and stare, get down on one knee
The vulture, so drawn to its repast
Did not offer me not even one pass!

This bird, it mocks me, shown not even a glance
I shout - then nothing - so I begin to advance
My rhythm increases as I hurry the path
Towards the vulture, and his venison bath

As I am ten steps away, the vulture turns
To look at the raven among the ferns
Silent I stop, in pure disbelief
That the vulture still has not noticed me

The anger - it boils and bakes my mind
As I begin to sprint, right at the vulture in sight
Two steps away, and the vulture takes leave
But still, he pay no attention to me.

I stare at the pile of red on the ground
My teeth are grinding, my hands still wound
For if I ever see a vulture again
I will ensure, I declare! It will come to its end.

I march away, with my lesson learned,
When I peer back and see the vulture returned
Not only one, but with three this time
No sound, no movement - still as a mime

My heart does not race
My anger takes haste
I leave the path, my rhythm is steady
For when I return - I will be ready.

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She knelt in bed before the world, and with her fingers
traced the places I had marked
for a book I had read, or a dream
Her knees left twin divots in my mattress
for us to live in
And I pulled her down to me
to savor it, to say
 
Have you ever noticed that
it's all so much louder when you plug your ears?
A breath could bend a bird in flight
slam an open door
 
Her soft head grew heavy on the crook
of my arm, sent down needles
I spoke of nothing
that mattered

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Pink Floyd said it best - “And then one day you find ten years have got behind you
No one told you when to run, you missed the starting gun“

Humans have a tendency to categorize events, moments, feelings.
Ups and downs,
good days and bad days,
good weather, bad weather.

We wait for a huge moment, the next vacation, the next achievement or job promotion.

But if we always walk around, waiting for the next up, and waiting for the down to end, we will always find a way to disappoint ourselves, to expect more.

We will forget to live, to experience life.
We will miss the starting gun.

If we always expect more of tomorrow than we ask of today, we will inevitably wait for something that never comes.

If tomorrow must always be better than today, we will never have our best day.
Because tomorrow will always be better.
And if tomorrow isn’t better, the day after will be.

But maybe life isn’t about identifying good things and bad things, but rather experiencing what life has to give.

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I wrote this, along with a different piece because i've recently experienced some things in my life which have shaken up my perspective.
This is my first work i actually show to others, hope you like it!
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Get out of the kitchen
Before I get angry
Sinew tearing
Raw chicken pastry

Pressure’s rising
Pressure’s rising
Steam is building
Circuits firing

Leave the dream behind
Brown sauce and rice
Fridge your life
Fridge your life

Microwave away
Will you be saved?
It’s better the next day
Better the next day

Keep telling me, telling me
It’s better the next day
Fibers ripping
Crispy chicken

Lay it on top
A beautiful lie
That’s breaded and fried
Breaded and fried

Choke it down
Ignoring the sound
Timer’s gone off
You can’t get enough

It’s better the next day
Better the next day
Better the next day
Better the next day

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I put it on trial.

Word by word.
Line by line.

No applause.
No benefit of doubt.

Do you earn placement
or are you just flowers

Do you carry weight
or hide behind the rhyme

Asked until it broke
or held.

Some lines sounding grand
but fail.

Some lines ordinary
yet stay.

I reach for sharper
and find dull.

I reach for louder
and lose voice. 

I leave it.

Every word
that is standing,
not untouched,
refused to move

not improved,
acquitted.

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I was left bleeding
from an incision
starting at approximately my belly button
going all the way up to the tip of my chin.
underneath my split skin
my sternum was cracked
unsealed
leaving my heart exposed
blown open

I thought it was grief that did this
I was wrong
I know now what grief did but before I tell you
you should know
that grief didn’t cut me open
leaving my heart exposed
through a gaping hole in my chest
death did

grief was there before death blew me open
it sat on my chest making it hard to breathe
it gripped my throat making it impossible to swallow
tainted my food, made everything tasteless
grief was there when death blew me open
it did not jump in to stop the bleeding
it insisted I bleed out, let me scream and writhe,
and all the while
did not assure me that I would survive this

grief was there while blood pooled around me
and my heartbeat weakened
and it started to stitch me back up
but not in a way that made sense
like from the bottom to the top
or from the inside out

grief started sewing me up
somewhere along the surface
maybe at my chin
without offering to numb me
its first sutures were sloppy
deep
and came with agonizing pain
indescribable really

slowly, imperceptibly
the pain of grief’s needle dulled
or
maybe I got used to the sharpness
grief continued to place stitches along still open sections of my gash
moving seemingly randomly
a few here
a few there
sometimes hitting an especially sore spot
poking me, shocking me,
causing me to double over in anguish
and spend the morning curled up
on the kitchen floor

while grief placed its excruciating stitches along my abdomen
it tended to my fragmented heart.
with soft hands and a delicate touch
grief slowly and tenderly
pieced it back together
dusting gold along the jagged edges
and holding the newly empty chambers
with a thoughtful caution
never failing to remind me
that my insides will never look the same

grief has stayed close by
my life orbits around it
ironically, or not, just how I used to orbit around you
before death came and took you away
leaving me to bleed out
and grief to clean up
now, most of the time
grief is rather stoic
but sometimes I feel its breath on the back of my neck
sending shivers down my spine
and sometimes it jabs me in my wound
making me gasp and hold my sides together
and sometimes it reaches its whole hand in
splitting me back open
just for an hour
reminding me and my body of deaths final sentence
leaving me in a puddle of my own salty tears
and then rubbing my back to sleep

grief suffocated me before death’s violent attack and
grief achingly knit my skin back together
and grief carefully jigsawed the pieces of my heart
but
what grief didn’t do
was wire my shattered breastbone back together
no
grief left my chest wall soft
permeable
allowing the outside in
and the inside out
leaving me with a body in an unrecognizable shape
the newness of which
I am still getting to know

---

1|2

Ive seen the face poking out of them clouds up there yonder

You say there are too many words

But there are not enough to describe that face

It imposes hollow eyes like something tribal

It tells me to question my whole life

friend and rival

It beams out from between thick crusts of abandoned cloud

It begs no pathetic collective it is whole except for a nose that doesn't fit

It promises rain and truth and strife and peace and god and then maybe some death

It promises those deep greys that scream flood flood from the bewitched sky face

It grusses the mountain and lets loose on the lowland

That face all pale and wiggly unapologetic fully fully that deiety

Some nestle in their coziest corners blanketed and deafened

Others seek the beginning of those inevitable thunder like drums

The ones the boom and hug the soul

The ones that emit fortune and wrath simultaneously

uncanny gloom building itself and the face still smirks

My spirit dances up there in the chaos

let me have mine these thoughts quasi furled dream unfolding

Hands go up and down with the deluge the face looms again

The smile and eyes wash the tarmac rearrange these streets

Torrential relentless, dragging what doesnt belong

Robbing its essence, as that thing did the city when the city was dry

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It is almost

Impossible

to have too few notes..

But it is real easy to have too many.

Now see,

hold that up

and look at it

take your time

try to read it like

you listen to the notes

that don't get played

If it ain't there

Just wait

Let's face it

you ain't goin'

nowhere

It can't find you.

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Man, you have to ask what it is,

you'll never get it

Louis Armstrong

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06/06/14

Listen to some Coltrane

...and philosophize

I miss the rain
I miss the mundane pain
I miss the mistakes
I miss the calm sound of the lakes 
I miss feeling whole
I miss knowing my role
I miss having wonder
I miss crashing thunder 
I miss bright colours
I miss hearing the others

I’ve let it all go
I’ve not avoided the overflow 
I’ve buried myself deep
I’ve sold it all dirt cheap
I’ve been numb to the strain
I’ve been lost in a hurricane
I’ve left feeling drowned
I’ve remained earthbound
I’ve nothing left to tend
I’ve wondered where it will end

I miss me

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***To Love an Alien***

We move in slow, deliberate rings,
our hands grabbing across quiet air,
each of us trying to close
the chasm between.

I offer pressed petals,
raw declarations of love,
half-formed dreams;
you take them gently,
mapping their variables,
searching for equations
in the pulse beneath my skin.

I bring you flowers
blown of glass in wild heat-
passionate, uneven and bright.
You take them softly into your palms,
analyzing refractions of their light,
calculating density,
offering me the proof in pride,
a wilted bouquet in my hands.

When the thunderstorm rattles windowpanes,
I reach for the heavy muscle of your arm,
desperate to pull you into the rumble,
envisioning laughter and dances in rain.
I imagine our naked bodies
Pale and wet in the flashing light,
but you turn toward me,
steady, intent, logical and safe.
You tell me the speed of the flash,
the distance of the storm,
the risk of exposure.

But when mouths merge,
and the world goes muffled,
uncertainty drops into a low, far-off hum.
In the breathless hush,
I feel the hitch in your throat-
the sudden, sharp catch of air
before you press into the kiss,
your palm heavy and desperate against my spine:
the proof of your love.

Yet in the stillness, neither of us pulls closer,
neither of us lets go-
suspended in the familiar place,
fearful of the other’s desire.

We lean forehead to forehead in the quiet,
eyes locked, holding tight our common thread.
Your lips move in precise, analytical reason;
mine break into fevered, unfinished song.

We press our fingers into the space between us,
still trying to translate every breath as it passes.
My beautiful love, we are two stars
bound in binary burn,
pulling against the vacuum between us.

To love a quiet mirror is easy-
to love an alien sky
is the voyage that makes me whole.

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I know you are up there, waiting for me.

And I am a coward, maa, I cannot follow you.

You want me to arrive, and a part of me wants that too,

but I am too selfishly attached to being alive.

I want to rest in your warm lap forever.

Instead, I am sitting here, engulfed in the noise of this world.

This world is cruel. It offers me nothing except the constant ache of your absence and the weight of my own guilt.

Yet I stay.

I think about ending it.

just a knife to the throat, or poison in the dark.

anything to drag myself out of the living and into the dead.

But I am too much of a coward to do it, maa. So coward in my head.

I know it would mean the end of this pain.

It would mean meeting you again in the afterlife.

And that is the only thing I truly want.

But I am a hideous person,

and I know I don't have the guts to let this body go.

Instead, look at me.

When you first left, I thought I couldn't survive a single second.

Now look at me—laughing, giggling at some stupid video on a glowing screen, completely forgetting for a moment that you are gone and I've broken our pact.

Look at me enjoying all these small, petty earthly pleasures.

Do you hate me now, maa, in the quiet of your heavens?

I want to meet you.

I cannot do it myself.

So order one of your angels off your shelf.

If they see me laughing, or enjoying something I wasn't meant to,

stab me, slit me, throw me, kill me—that's what I need them to do.

Free this life out of me and let me come to you, 'cause I am a coward to do it myself, maa, and that is the only truth left

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Thank you for the gift,

by the way I know you dressed as Santa last year.

It's okay.

I'm growing out of the secret thing

Everyone at school said He wasn't real.

Will our family ever be close again?

Sorry if that's "left field"—

I learned that term

from my friend Ricky in like 3rd grade.

I think about you all the time, you know.

Is there any way you could come back?

It's okay.

I'm ten now, and I kind of get it.

Why you stopped coming.

Mamá says doors can open

if somebody knocks.

I don't have a door to knock on,

so I'm writing this letter instead.

I tried to wear the dress you sent.

It's too long, but I'm growing.

It's okay.

Soon it'll fit.

Mamá says Christmas is when family forgives.

So I hope you come for dinner,

or even just a hug at the door.

It's okay.

Love,

Your sobrina

1

2

I never asked for perfection.
I wasn’t looking for heaven
in your hands.

I just wanted one good thing.
One good thing
that would stay good
and not leave.

Instead,

I found myself waiting,
begging to be seen
by someone who knew
I was standing there all along.

I will no longer live in your shadow,
Hoping this time you’ll see me ,
Finally see my worth

no more will I measure myself
by the way you look through me,
the way you make me believe
I’m never good enough.

I ask ,
how much more of myself
do I have to lose
before you finally see me
And all the love I have to give.

You left me digging through the silence,
Turning over memories
Like bodies in shallow graves ,
Looking for answers
In places they could never be found.

Somewhere in all that digging
I didn’t realize
I was the one being buried.

So my final act :

I leave the shovel
Where it lies
Not because I’ve found what I was looking for,
I had to see
It’s not worth burying
Any more of me
Just to have you

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Thunder booms and lightning crashes

The sky opens up, pouring its misery out on the land

The trees shudder and brace for impact

The earth screams as it gets washed away

-

Worms flail helplessly in newly formed oceans

People scamper for cover from the wet bullets

Kids watch the battle from the windows

Zeus smiles down at his creation

-

And suddenly, it’s over

The sun peaks out from behind its cloudy blinds

The day resumes, but better than before

Somehow, the heavenly catharsis has become our own
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Oh Venus you beauty of the sky

Your gifts I see in every daughter

But not I, for I am a son of Mars

But Mars can be beautiful too

But not me, those gifts I do not open

Would it be right to ask for your blessings?

Am I one of Venus trapped in the brood of mars?

Or does my skin fit my hand and I am just caught

In your trance?

Is beauty found elsewhere, am I just blind?

At night, alone, the moon tells me my truth.

But by the dawn my mind is locked on you.

Venus I love you, I am obsessed

But I am a son of Mars, and I must not

Get caught in your eye. For me, it is a lie.

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Childhood, It truly is the worst of your obsessions

The days of the past eat more of your present

Whenever you try to force it to pass

It flails even more, Frantic to stand

You leave all your friends and people behind

To deal with a beast that had been denied

Sadistic of a memory it truly is

Never wanted life, It's just an abyss

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Hi, This is my 3rd english poem that I've ever made, I'm not that big of an english poetry guy and english isn't even my first language, So if my poem has some mistakes please don't be too harsh, And i know it might seem kind of stupid that a teen is writing a poem about childhood, Or at least some people might see it stupid, But I don't write poems that only apply for me, I write poems as whoever the person in the poem is, And in this poem its pretty obvious it isn't someone who's living his childhood :)

Feel the flow,
Down in your soul
Heal your mind,
Reach for your goal

Rest if you must,
Breathe, take your time
The goodness of life,
Inside you’ll find

Hold your head high
You’ve made it this far
Smile, enjoy, have faith today
You are beautiful as you are

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You could be the prettiest shade of blue
But for those who wanted someone else
You are just another shade of blue

You took over my heart like a dominant red
Making me fall for her shade
But left me alone in dread
for that violet she wanted instead

She never cared to see my true self
For she wanted violet, not blue
I say to myself “Maybe she never wanted you,
Perhaps I am the wrong shade of blue”

In the end,
I remember that I am a bleak shade of blue
And I am fine with what I am
Still,
You were the prettiest shade of red
That dreamt of violet, not blue

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