r/OCPoetry • • 1d ago

Feedback Please All is Good

Feel the flow,
Down in your soul
Heal your mind,
Reach for your goal

Rest if you must,
Breathe, take your time
The goodness of life,
Inside you’ll find

Hold your head high
You’ve made it this far
Smile, enjoy, have faith today
You are beautiful as you are

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u/IamWhisper3319 21h ago

I love this type of optimistic motivational poems, it gives a feeling of anime openings.

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u/Ok-Swordfish-9480 20h ago

Thanks so much for these kind words, I needed something uplifting that day…