What do you think of my drawings?

What rate would y’all give this darling face?

Lowkey scared but hey ho

Looking at this both ways you may get a different perspective. Can you identify things I created during the whole process? Dedicated to Camilo

These are my two ocs, Sprig and King Orlaith ^w^

some recent oil pastel pieces of mine (and close ups), thinking about listing them online

The brushes on Krita (laptop) are more fun to work with but line work is a pain to do with a mouse. Give it to me, how did I do?

Hope it fits here! Also, rate it, i eager to know your opinions ;))

What do you thinn

The drawing itself was done on a standard 8.5x11" sheet of paper, with an HB2 pencil for outlining, and an 8B, 10B, and 12B set of pencils for shading. I did some editing and added more effects digitally, using Clip Studio to add more contrast between the Titanic, and the background. Are these both good?

I’d like to hear how you’d critique it against the actual exam brief and scoring rubric.

The task: “Travelers” sketch

• Build a composition with more than three figures of different ages and genders, set in an outdoor environment.
• Depict the figures anatomically correctly and in proportion, showing gender characteristics.
• Place figures and objects consistently with their position in space.
• Render figures and environment using the rules of linear and atmospheric perspective.
• Include natural or urban elements related to the theme.
• Convey the mood through the figures’ poses and a rich range of graphic means.
• Materials: black media only (black pencils, fineliner, ink with pen/brush, black ballpoint).

Scoring rubric (40 points total, 10 per criterion)

1. Proportions of the head and figure are correct and appropriate to age and gender.
2. Space is built using elements of perspective.
3. The surrounding environment includes forms, objects and details that fit the theme.
4. Skill in using the drawing material is demonstrated.

What I’d love feedback on:

• How would you score each criterion?
• Does the piece read as “Travelers” to you?
• Is this type of loose or rough style seem appropriate for such exams? I've never been to art school and have been self-taught. No references used just pencil and my sketchbook, sorry that it's not one full paper.
• Any suggestions for how the student could have strengthened the perspective and composition while keeping this energy?