r/trapproduction • u/Infrah • 4d ago

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u/mxon9 4d ago

bit personal emo rap of mine, all project prod by me, might sound corny, roast me if you want, peace <3

https://on.soundcloud.com/4Vs9YVRbgqlPtrcswT

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u/GetMXD 2d ago

heard it. you said roast so here's the mix side haha. the intro is nice and wide, then when the beat drops at 0:16 everything squeezes into the middle, so the drop ends up feeling smaller than the intro instead of bigger. same thing again coming out of the break around 1:52.

keep the 808 and vocal centered but let the melody or that intro texture stay wide under the beat so the drop actually opens up

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u/DecDub 4d ago

Returning all feedback

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u/Due-Weakness-4386 4d ago

I like it! Love the 808 rolls. https://youtu.be/mBrck-Cgi8E?si=HtoYs0nELO4NwOdQ what you think of my shi?

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u/mxon9 4d ago

this is really clean, the snare is really full, i like it!

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u/Puzzleheaded_Ask3977 1h ago

Good production bro

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u/Abject-Help-1375 4d ago

Left some thoughts on couple tracks downthread. My own thing is a beat I made after getting stuck in traffic for hour, the bass is supposed to feel like that slow crawl. Still not sure about the hi-hat pattern in the second half, maybe too busy?