Hi everyone!

Could you please review my Urdu Nastaliq handwriting and point out any mistakes?

I'm not looking for spelling corrections, as I can ask ChatGPT about those.

Instead, I'd like to know whether I'm forming the letters correctly, joining them properly, and writing the words the right way.

I've been learning to read and write Urdu for about 2–3 months, and I'd really appreciate any feedback or suggestions to help me improve.

Thank you! ❤️

This is a bittersweet romantic poetry which states the feelings of an admirer towards his admiration.

A person who is fond of popularity and fame is found to be beautiful, and that is why she tests her admirer... But, though she tests him and puts up conditions for her presence.. he still misses her absence.

so I used to study urdu when I was in highschool and after that I dropped it, now I want to get back into it any suggestions on books or any YouTube channels

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تمام احباب سے گزارش ہے کہ لکھائی کا جائزہ اور اپنی قیمتی رائے کا اظہار کیجیے۔

if your memory is a sailboat at sea

an endless ocean is solitude for me

Written By Harsh Verma (Me).

Hinglish:

Hum jise samajhte the umr bhar ki panaah,

Wahi hamare liye sabse bada gunah nikle.

Toote hue dil ka hisaab kis se maangu?

Wo gunah karke bhi be-gunah nikle.

हिंदी / Urdu in Devanagari:

हम जिसे समझते थे उम्र भर की पनाह,

वही हमारे लिए सबसे बड़ा गुनाह निकले।

टूटे हुए दिल का हिसाब किस से मांगू?

वो गुनाह करके भी बे-गुनाह निकले।

I want to learn conversational Urdu, and came across Preply in another Reddit.

My starting point is almost a complete beginner and I'm thinking of starting with 3 lessons per week.

Any feedback would be appreciated.