Went heavy on Gravis since I’ve got plenty, but wanted to make it punch hard with dreads and terminators. What’s your judgement?

GRAVIS (1,980 Points)

Space Marines
Iron Hands
Gravis Linebreaker Force, Ironclad Champions, and Terminator Storm Force (3 Detachment Points)
Take and Hold
Strike Force (2,000 Points)

ATTACHED UNITS

Attached unit 1

Iron Father Feirros (85 Points)
• Attached as: Leader (Character)
• 1x Bolt Pistol
• 1x Gorgon’s Wrath
• 1x Harrowhand
• 1x Medusan Manipuli

Heavy Intercessor Squad (230 Points)
• Attached as: Bodyguard (Battleline)
• 9x Heavy Intercessor
◦ 9x Bolt Pistol
◦ 9x Ceramite Fists
◦ 9x Heavy Bolt Rifle
• 1x Heavy Intercessor Sergeant
◦ 1x Bolt Pistol
◦ 1x Ceramite Fists
◦ 1x Heavy Bolt Rifle

Attached unit 2

Captain in Terminator Armour (110 Points)
• Attached as: Leader (Character)
• 1x Relic Weapon
• 1x Storm Bolter
• Enhancements: Champion of the First Company

Terminator Squad (190 Points)
• Attached as: Bodyguard
• 4x Terminator
◦ 1x Assault Cannon
◦ 4x Power Fist
◦ 3x Storm Bolter
• 1x Terminator Sergeant
◦ 1x Power Weapon
◦ 1x Storm Bolter

CHARACTERS

Captain in Gravis Armour (110 Points)
• Warlord
• 1x Master-crafted Heavy Bolt Rifle
• 1x Master-crafted Power Weapon
• Enhancements: Relentless Advance

Techmarine (55 Points)
• 1x Forge Bolter
• 1x Grav-pistol
• 1x Omnissian Power Axe and Servo-arm

Techmarine (55 Points)
• 1x Forge Bolter
• 1x Grav-pistol
• 1x Omnissian Power Axe and Servo-arm

Techmarine (55 Points)
• 1x Forge Bolter
• 1x Grav-pistol
• 1x Omnissian Power Axe and Servo-arm

OTHER DATASHEETS

Aggressor Squad (90 Points)
• 1x Aggressor Sergeant
◦ 1x Auto Boltstorm Gauntlets
◦ 1x Fragstorm Grenade Launcher
◦ 1x Twin Power Fists
• 2x Aggressor
◦ 2x Auto Boltstorm Gauntlets
◦ 2x Fragstorm Grenade Launcher
◦ 2x Twin Power Fists

Ballistus Dreadnought (190 Points)
• 1x Armoured Feet
• 1x Ballistus Lascannon
• 1x Ballistus Missile Launcher
• 1x Storm Bolters
• Enhancements: Artificer Sarcophagus (Upgrade)

Brutalis Dreadnought (190 Points)
• 1x Brutalis Talons
• 1x Twin Icarus Ironhail Heavy Stubber
• 1x Twin Multi-melta
• Enhancements: Venerable Champion (Aura) (Upgrade)

Inceptor Squad (130 Points)
• 2x Inceptor
◦ 2x Ceramite Fists
◦ 2x Plasma Exterminators
• 1x Inceptor Sergeant
◦ 1x Ceramite Fists
◦ 1x Plasma Exterminators

Redemptor Dreadnought (220 Points)
• 1x Fragstorm Grenade Launchers
• 1x Icarus Rocket Pod
• 1x Macro Plasma Incinerator
• 1x Onslaught Gatling Cannon
• 1x Redemptor Fist
• Enhancements: Artificer Sarcophagus (Upgrade)

Repulsor Executioner (270 Points)
• 1x Armoured Hull
• 1x Defensive Array
• 1x Heavy Laser Destroyer
• 1x Heavy Onslaught Gatling Cannon
• 1x Twin Heavy Bolter

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