r/FanFiction • u/CactusChowder • 3h ago
Activities and Events Excerpt game: Excerpts that DON'T contain the word (but relate to it)
- Leave a top-level comment with a word, any word.
- Reply to top-level comments with an excerpt (try not to go over 600 words) that is about the idea behind that word, or relates to that word somehow, but does not contain that specific word!
Suppose the top-level comment word is 'run.'
You can share an excerpt where you very directly write that a character dashes down the road, but you happened to use the word 'dash' instead of 'run.'
Or, you could share an excerpt where you describe a character's racing breath and pounding heartbeat and working legs, all without ever using the word 'run.'
There could be a lot of ways to interpret this, approach it however you want! It's best to explain what you're going for if you think it could be unclear. For example, suppose the word is 'run,' and you want to share an excerpt where a character is running his mouth (and you never write the word 'run'). It would be helpful to explain why you're posting a snippet about a character talking a lot under the word 'run.'
Additional thoughts. Please:
- Use content warnings as needed, and link to NSFW excerpts instead of posting them directly.
- Leave some nice comments (no concrit unless requested) for other writers! At minimum, if possible, for each top-level word that you post, respond to at least one excerpt posted under it. You don't have to engage with content you aren't comfortable with, but please be open to leaving a nice comment on writing that may not be your preferred genre or fandom!
It's not wrong at all to do the minimum! People will have limited time and energy for plenty of reasons. But if you can do more and choose to do more, let's celebrate! I'm going to try something new & leave a top-level comment where you can celebrate if you leave a nice comment on five excerpts or more ❤️