Lesson 1 done

[u/TheAugurRehan]

Pls critique if I should move on or not

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[u/mooncrosser]

You can move on, the requirements are not that high, and the results are comparable to other students doing lesson 1. What I recommend is reviewing the Y method for drawing boxes again, your lines do not converge properly in a lot of the boxes. Do not repeat the exercise - you'll be doing the 250 boxes challenge next, you'll have plenty of opportunity to practice, but make sure you understand the idea behind the Y method before you proceed as it's crucial.

[u/quadrupleccc]

Don't dwell on the exercises. It is very valuable for you to move on. Leaving it as is will give you reference for later. The point of doing these is to apply a learned approach to mark-making rather than producing perfect output.