Lesson 1 H/W Critique Request

[u/ishida-wannabe]

Some information if needed:
I am beginner with only a little art background.
These exercises were done in 10 days, with 2-3 hours of studying daily.
All exercises except Organic Perspective were done in ballpoint, the last two were done with 0.5 fineliner.
Random pencil squares (in Table of Ellipses, Ellipses in Planes and Funnels exercises) are for me, to highlight some mistakes. If needed, I can erase and take picture again.
Don't go easy on me and thank you for your feedback.
And lastly, a couple of questions:
Can I move on to 250 box challenge?
Do I need to include Super-Imposed Lines exercise in my regular warm-up? I did up until now, but Comfy stated multiple times throughout Lesson 1 that all free-handed strokes are to be made using the ghosting method, and Super-Imposed Lines exercise doesn't include Preparation step of the said method, so I wonder if doing it can hinder my progress.

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[u/Uncomfortable]

Since submissions that are generally well done get upvoted but don't tend to get responses, your work is fine and you can feel comfortable continuing forwards. If you'd like to get more detailed feedback, checking out the critique exchange program operated by students on our discord chat server may be helpful.

As to your question, the super imposed lines exercise primarily focuses on executing marks confidently. Whether you use the ghosting method for it or not doesn't really impact its specific goals. While you should include it in your warmup rotation, it's up to you if you want to apply the ghosting method to it or not.

[u/ishida-wannabe → u/Uncomfortable]

Thank you very much for approving my work and answering my question! Love your course!