My book is a science fantasy and it just entered its third round of betas. It has issues, and every round is better than the previous one.
But two consistent “I, as a writer, am unable to fix that bro” feedback I’m getting is
Tenses mixup (some are actual faults, some are just memories popping up and people not realising. Easy fix by changing words)
Whiplash from humor followed by immediate horror (one POV is sarcastic and does it. I can’t see it unless betas mark it)
This is consistent and I think I need line edit, but I can NOT afford that. So I’m going for copy editing to fix tenses and other issues. My editor said she’ll do some Point 2 fixing for free (she’s a writer too), but that won’t be her job so I’ll be unsure if the whiplash will be gone since I’m not paying for that service.
And now I’m second guessing. A part of me says I should save money and spend it on editing when I earn back, which is… how do I professionally say stupid?
I’ve DNFed loads of self published books bcz they weren’t edited properly.
But then I go, “What if I spend so much on this and people DNF if bcz of the lack of line editing?”
It’s a complex book, so I NEED editing. I just can’t afford the line + copy.
Hell, I preferred line over copy, but copy is 2x my current salary and line is 5x. That’s the only reason I’m going for copy editing.
So, for editors or people who have had books edited, if someone came to you with this rant and confusion, what would you say?