r/drawing • u/watchurthoughts • 8h ago
seeking crit Portrait Sketch
I used an image of Anok Yai for reference. Seeking constructive criticism as something doesnt look quite right. Thank you!
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u/watchurthoughts 8h ago
Yes, thank you. I feel like its all these little things that add up to one really big thing
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u/markmakesfun 5h ago
I like it. My only suggestion is to be a little more concerned about placing down lines so tonal areas areas read as tones. For example, on the right cheek there is a dark “line” that disturbs the tonal aspect of the cheek.
Note: I am NOT suggesting you change the style of the drawing. Just be aware that tonal areas need an evenness so the viewer can see it as a tone. I think your style is fine! It’s not a bad drawing!
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u/watchurthoughts 4h ago
Yes I see it now. Thank you for the feedback! I definitely need to work on being more intentional
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