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u/Kahalla 4d ago
If you are just working on drawing shapes and straight lines, you should maybe keep practicing until you can draw straight lines and basic shapes. I personally don't think there is anything to gain from posting online this early in the process.
No feedback from strangers will do you better than spending your time practicing at this stage. You have a long way to go.
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u/Nervous-Employ-9611 4d ago
Ima still apply what you saying but ima do it anyway because I like what I’m doing
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u/Fuzzy-Rub-2185 4d ago
Where's the second page?
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u/Nervous-Employ-9611 4d ago
The second page is on the left that’s why I made a line in the middle
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u/SwabMimingTV 4d ago
I think you've got the right to call anything a page that you want but most people would call that paneling because it's not symmetrically divided down the middle and shown as a single image.
I guess it only matters because I was also looking for the second page because I like the style.
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u/Qweeq13 4d ago
It just lacks proper composition. You are zooming into everything, the face, the drawings it makes everything hard to understand.
We need to see full face of the character, we need to see the table and the chair if the character is sitting.
You don't have to draw the entire room but an "establishing shot" of sorts is non negotiable.
As well as when showing the character drawing you need to show more of the table, more of the hand.
Otherwise it is all like looking through things under a magnifying glass.
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u/Nervous-Employ-9611 4d ago
I am practicing basic shapes I need to work on that
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u/LuHamster 4d ago
Go through the online free drawing course draw a box.
You need to learn the entire fundamentals of how to draw starting with drawing a box.
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u/Nervous-Employ-9611 4d ago
Ok I’m doing it now
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u/colorfulbat 3d ago
If you want to draw comics there is a book series that is far better and more on point than the soul sucking "draw a box". Try Framed Perspective. Also, you can continue to make comics, don't listen to people saying it's pointless to post. Have fun.
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