r/comic_crits • u/kohunaaa • 8d ago

Looking for feedback

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/my-witch-my-angel/list?title_no=1165855

Interested in feedback on my comic so far. I tend to struggle with the beginnings and end up kinda giving up, but this time I’m pushing myself to keep at it. Though ig I get so into it it’s hard to step back.

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u/NicholasIvins 7d ago

The art is good and it's action packed, but it's kind of hard to follow because it moves so quickly and introduces so much at once.

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u/zerhanna 3d ago

Agreed. It could use a slightly slower pace with more establishing shorts or more editing in the dialogue and narration boxes. For example, on the very first page:

"I didn't expect my first mission to be this..." "placed on infiltration" "deep in enemy territory..."

It doesn't make sense. But the text styling makes it look like it is meant to be read together.

The art is lovely, though.