r/comic_crits • u/RedBasketDrone • 9d ago

[OC] Preview for my comic Broadleaf, thoughts?

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Chapter One showed us the beauty of Leaf Isle. Now, Chapter Two takes away the whimsy and shows us a darker side of Broadleaf. With Beckett split from his father he's hunted by a vicious horde of feral squirrels that want to bury him alive!

If you want a copy the Kickstarter is live now and the link is in my bio. I’m mainly looking for thoughts on these pages though. Haven’t received much feedback and this seemed like a good place to get some. Thanks in advance!

Written/Co-Lettered by Brandon Horn
Masterfully Illustrated/Colored/Co-Lettered by Robert Jennex

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u/PrinceOfLemons 2d ago

This looks great! I love the muted color pallette and exciting panel composition! The deer looks a little... strange, but I guess that's the point! I love the squirreliors!

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u/RedBasketDrone 1d ago

Thank you! We’re live until Nov 1st if you want to grab a copy! Issue one is free to read on Global Comix!