r/CharacterDevelopment • u/WonderOfUs • 2h ago
Writing: Character Help How do constant losses affect a character?
I need help conceptualizing the kind of evolution a "loser" character might undergo, without them ceasing to be a "loser" or switching over to the "good guys' side" (since no such side will exist). If anyone here has ever created a loser, a pitiful failure who kept banging their face against the wall, how did you write them?
Long story short, I have this story about a competition among young magic apprentices, in which the winner earns the title of witch.
Among the participants is Blum Blorein, a natural born loser, who has lost this competition for three consecutive years, who has lost every competition she ever participated in. She plays the role of the rival in the story, she appears frequently, antagonizes the MC, loses in a humiliating way and runs away while claiming it didn’t count. She is annoying, petty, high on herself and above everything a sore loser.
She struggles to win because the contest demands the forging of alliances and the use of betrayal; yet, she is too critical and judgmental to secure allies, while simultaneously being so naive that anyone can easily take advantage of her. Furthermore, she often alienates others because of her faith: she is a Catholic witch (a peculiar combination) and, to make matters worse, a fervent believer who tends to view everyone else as a sinner. To ensure she doesn’t lose this time, her family has paid a powerful participant to protect her from the shadows, an act of assistance that she, however, interprets as divine intervention. Even so, even with that help, she is helpless on her own.
This character will evolve through constant defeats and humiliations at the hands of the protagonist, but my question is: in what direction? How does this downward spiral of failures unfold? How does someone who is a "loser" think, and how does their situation go from bad to worse? If the MC is a prick and a bully, and the possibility of them striking up a friendship is ruled out, what path would a rival character take?
You don’t have to necessarily help with my character; even by sharing your losers, you could help me get an idea of where to take mine.