Just wanted to organize some thoughts. And dw, just cause something doesn't appeal to me I don't consider it objectively bad.
First of all. WOW.
I was really expecting it to be a college romance with the "fake lovers" tag on every route.
Never in my life would I have been able to predict this was mostly about the Japanese movie industry and a mama mia plot where one of the male leads may be the poisoned incest m&m (basically she doesn't know who her dad is and 3/5 love interests could turn out to be your secret brother.)
I also just really liked how it approached screenplay writing, it was very interesting in that front.
Second of all YIKES
I have not seen a translation THIS BAD since Cafe Enchante, I'm shocked none of the reviews I've seen talk about it, basically every other sentence is wrong. It's honestly impressive how bad this official localization is.
Now for some opinions on the game; The mc Chiyuki is so boring 😂 this girl so bland if she was a spice she'd be flour.
They really underutilize her background and she has no personality to speak of, just your average self insert mc.
So if you prefer the mc to be, well you, I think you'll enjoy her more.
Personally I want the female lead to be her own character.
For the routes, they were a very mix of quality throughout. They all start really good and then have one or two plot developments that completely ruin it.
I could not believe my own two eyes when Kazuma got into an accident on his way to go confess his feelings, then woke up in that hospital bed and said "who are you?" Girl I crashed out.
Similarly with Harumi all of a sudden deciding he doesn't need anime, so many of these plot points were shoed in conflict to just pad in the plot. It's not fun when a plotline feels like someone just paused the story and you can do is wait for it to unpause.
With that said; did I have a good time?
Abso-fucking-lutely. It was a nice popcorn read, like a romance webtoon in otome format.
About the routes and characters:
Sena Yukito is the actual GOAT of this game, it's insane how much of a kindhearted guy he is. Bro is so principled I hope he gets everything and more. Literally every single couple in this game was only formed because Sena is HIM. Sena Yukito is unironically responsible for every single happy end in this game (his route also said Trans rights so that's a plus.) My only complaint with him, was that their confession scene was so goddamn awkward. I could not take her going "thank god you're not my brother" seriously😆 I've heard people complain about Kirari, but personally, I'm a fan 💝 I love that bitch, I love that Chiyuki loved her, they should kiss.
Nishijima Riku was a surprise cause I was not expecting him to be so toxic?? LMAO, not him using actual blackmail, absolutely devious. I liked his route the best and thought it had the least bullshit roadblocks, not to mention he and Chiyuki had the most appealing banter to me in the game.
I will say that the date with Sena made me like him more and Riku less.
Wtdym you're getting mad and then making it seem like Chiyuki is a CHEATER for going to this date when you're the one that
Told Sena Yukito that Chiyuki was interested in him
Told Chiyuki to go on a date with Sena
GIRL YOU PUT YOURSELF IN THIS GRAVE DIG YOURSELF OUT
Kamikubo Kazuma, the resident cuck of the game, was very very cute. His route was by the books childhood friend who's been in love with you the whole time, but damn it I like that book. Too bad he ruined everything by getting amnesia, god that was stupid.
I will say, I felt REALLY bad for him in every other route, cause we just had to keep breaking his heart and it was honestly hard to watch at times 😿
Makino Harumi was very cute at the beginning his whole closeted Otaku plot was endearing at first. But he really gave me a sour taste in my mouth after the whole thing with his dad (who I knew for a fact didn't actually hate his son), it felt like I was watching the same scene twice cause we literally just been through this with the college fangirls. The worst of it was the way he yelled at Chiyuki saying she could never understand him cause her parents died.
Hello???? Dick move, dump his ass and go date Kazuma instead.
And for what? His dad is cool and hot af, I wanted him instead. Fucking die boss baby I hate you Harumi.
Asagi Eiichiro. Just gonna go ahead and say that I am extremely biased cause I don't like the teacher x student dynamic. This plus the fact he's a veteran in a industry she's trying to break into AND her boss, dude is playing bingo with unbalanced power dynamics. Call HR on this mf.
As a side character I actually really liked him, he never came across as creepy or in love with Chiyuki in the other routes, it was a nice wholesome close mentor and mentee relationship.
In his own route...I mean it could have been worse. It helps that he was barely there even though his route is so short. I think it doesn't help that Chiyuki genuinely admires him. If she was a DILF chaser I would have had a much better time, but she mostly seemed unaware of his intentions and her own feelings so I wasn't a fan, I'm sorry.
Overall: I had a good time even though some parts of it were really not to my taste, idk how people view rankings but to me 5/10 means that out of the max enjoyment I could have, I had about half. I don't hate it unless it's a 0 lol.
Ml ranking
Sena Yukito > Kamikubo Kazuma > Nishijima Riku >>> Asagi Eichiiro > Makino Harumi
Route ranking
Nishijima Riku > Sena Yukito > Makino Harumi = Kamikubo Kazuma > Asagi Eichiiro